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The Lesson Boardwalk Empire Should Have Learned from the Simpsons

The Boardwalk Empire series finale aired a couple of weeks ago, and though I already miss it and consider it one of my favourite shows of all time, I can’t help but feel disappointed by it. As great as the show was, I believe the writers missed out on an opportunity to make it one of the truly greatest shows of all time. After thinking about it for a couple of weeks, I believe the problem was that the writers failed to learn a valuable lesson from The Simpsons.

When The Simpsons first debuted over a quarter century ago, the star of the show was a 10 year old boy named Bart Simpson. As the first network cartoon aimed at an adult audience, the wise-cracking character became a nationwide sensation, complete with his own hit single. Once the initial infatuation with Bart subsided, the writers rather quickly and decisively shifted the focus of the show to Bart’s father Homer. Despite the notoriety and attention that Bart was able to bring to the show, his character was inherently shallower than Homer’s. Homer, who was working on raising children, maintaining a happy marriage, and keeping a job he was woefully unqualified for, offered far more possibilities for the writers. Had the show continued to focus on Bart, the show may well have died off once the Bart fad faded. By focusing on Homer, the show was able to become the most successful in the history of television.

When Boardwalk Empire debuted in September 2010, the star of the show was unquestionably Nucky Thompson, who was played by Steve Buscemi, the only widely known cast member. It appears that the writers of the show had a formula that involved following along with the historical developments relating to prohibition and organized crime, but also introducing a fictional rival to Nucky every season or two. The first such character was Jimmy Darmody, played by the talented by largely unknown actor Michael Pitt.

Much like the Simpsons, it became clear that Jimmy’s character had more depth and gave the writers more options than Nucky. Nucky was a corrupt political figure and gangster at the beginning of the show, and he was much the same at the end of the show. Throughout the course of the series he gradually became more of a gangster, and we learned a little more about him, but looking back on it, his character remained more or less static throughout.

Jimmy’s character offered much better opportunities for character and plot development. Nucky was a mentor/father figure to him, but was also his rival. This dynamic allowed the writers to develop a complex relationship where Jimmy both admired and perhaps loved Nucky, but due to his ambition and Machiavellian mother also plotted to depose him. The battle between Nucky and Jimmy allowed the writers to explore the nature in which power is attained, held, and ultimately, lost. Jimmy was the child of both an abused and abusive mother, a war hero, a devoted husband and father, and an aspiring mob boss. The writers could have easily pivoted and made the battle between Nucky and Jimmy an integral part of the entire series. Instead, they killed Jimmy off at the end of season two.

When Jimmy was killed I asked myself “What is this show about now?” In season three I found out the answer to that question was – not much. Unlike Jimmy’s character, who literally grew up around Nucky, the rival in season three was simply a cartoonish villain that was clearly destined to provide for some exciting and entertaining scenes but then get killed off at the end. In season 4 we are introduced to another villain who causes trouble but is predictably vanquished at the end of the season. By season 5, HBO had given up on the show and gave the writers a mere 8 episodes to clue things up. This abbreviated final season spent half the time with unenlightening flashbacks and the rest of the time killing off characters.

The truth is the show never recovered from killing off Jimmy. If the writers had realized early on that the show was really about Jimmy rather than Nucky, it would likely still be on the air and be receiving serious consideration as the best show that HBO has ever produced.

Some Thoughts on Boardwalk Empire – “The Devil You Know”

  1. Chalky White’s character deserved a much better final scene

Never has the writers’ task of cluing up this series in a hurry seemed more evident than with this week’s killing of Chalky White. Chalky had presumably been hell bent on getting his revenge on Narcisse, but in the process met up with his old flame and learned that he had given birth to his daughter while he was in jail. Daughter tells him how Narcisse has kept her under his thumb and prevented her from having a career as a recording artist. When Narcisse enters the room, it seems like Chalky had the perfect opportunity to gain his revenge and Daughter’s freedom with single bullet, but instead he gets neither. He hands over his gun for an obviously false promise to release her. Chalky is then quickly killed and Daughter is left facing the same bleak future.

  1. The fake drop made absolutely no sense

Why would Eli and Van Alden take the risk of making a drop with a bag full of newspapers when they make drops with real money all the time? They presumably make collections daily, so there is absolutely no reason for them to stuff the bag full of paper. The undercover cop, who is presumably a brilliant guy to have survived so long in his job, would have known that was a terrible risk, and he knew there was a chance that the guys would spill the beans if they were caught so he would obviously want them to take real money for the drop.

  1. Those Nucky drunk in a bar scene was a total waste of time.

We’ve already seen more than enough of Nucky getting drunk and wallowing in his troubles over the course of the series, so with only two episodes left to clue up this story the writers certainly don’t need to waste time showing him drinking, singing, and fighting with strangers in a bar. The writers appear to have clock management skills on par with Andy Reid. We have just past the two minute warning so it is time for the writers to stop calling runs up the middle.

  1. I am predicting that we are going to find out that Nucky is actually Jimmy’s real father.

I know that sounds absurd, but it seems like the only way that all of these flashbacks will have made any sense at all. Throughout the series, and particularly in this final season, Nucky not having any children has been a consistent underlying theme. From the death of his infant son, to the way he took in Margaret’s children as his own, to the contrast with his brother whose wife has been having children throughout the entire series. Finding out in the end that he had killed his own son would overlay perfectly with this theme and would help tie together all of the seasons. One semi-plausible scenario is that after Nucky’s son and wife die, he goes on a prolonged drunken binge and may not recall sleeping with Gillian. The timeline would actually line up nicely as a teenage Gillian has been introduced in the flashbacks at the same time that his wife is pregnant.


Boardwalk Empire’s Sad Limp to the Finish Line

When Boardwalk Empire debuted with a captivating Martin Scorsese directed episode, it seemed the show was destined to become one of the truly great cable dramas, inhabiting the same rarefied air of The Sopranos and Breaking Bad. During football season, no matter who was playing on Sunday night football, I would always switch over to Boardwalk Empire for an hour. I had a PVR but there was no way I could wait a day to watch the show. The show ruled my fall Sunday evening viewing habits for two years. Then they killed off Jimmy Darmody.

Jimmy Darmody’s death was the disappointing character departure of any show I have ever cared about. It wasn’t that I was so emotionally attached to the character, but rather that the first two years had been built around then relationship between Jimmy and Nucky. When Michael Pitt’s character was written out of the show I found myself wondering “What is this show going to be about now?” Sadly, it seems the writers were probably asking themselves the same question.

In season 3, we were introduced to a cartoonish villain named Gyp Rossetti. Though Bobby Cannavale did a marvelous job portraying the character, it was clear from the beginning that he was destined to fail in his battle against Nucky and would be killed off at the end of the season. This was in stark contrast to the Jimmy Darmody character whose entire life had been intertwined with Nucky. The two decade background with Nucky and Jimmy allowed the writers to give much more depth and complexity to their relationship. The Gyp Rosetti character, though entertaining, was purely superficial. With the Jimmy plot line, there was a sense that the show was building towards something; when Gyp Rosetti came on the scene the show began simply treading water. To be fair, this season did deliver the best line in the show’s history when Van Alden/Mueller’s wife says to him “I’ll hold his legs. Husband!”

Nelson Van Alden/George Mueller is perhaps my favourite character in the show, but while I always craved more scenes with him, his moving to Chicago helped exacerbate an overly sprawling story line and gave the impression that the writers had perhaps bitten off more than they could chew. By the fourth season, Nucky seemed to have been reduced to a supporting character as much of the storyline was focused on the rivalry between Chaulky and Narcisse.

There may well have been some grand plan to neatly tie all of these unwieldy story-lines together, but the show’s appeal had declined so much in seasons 3 and 4 that it appears as if HBO simply gave up on the show and told the writers to simply clue things up. Such as their apparent displeasure with the show that they were only willing to grant 8 episodes to tie all of these loose ends together. Bizarrely, even with such little time left, the writers have decided to waste almost half of the final season with flashbacks to Nucky’s childhood. These flashbacks do absolutely nothing to advance the plot and have somehow failed to provide any meaningful insight into Nucky’s character. Thus far, they have simply served to waste valuable time and confirm what we already knew; Nucky was poor, his father was a jerk, and the Dabney Coleman took him under his wing.

With only 4 episodes left, it is difficult to see how the writers can bring this series to anything remotely resembling a satisfying conclusion. When you step back, there aren’t really any big questions left to be answered in the show. Most of the characters are historical figures, so we know what will happen to them; the only question is whether Chaulky White manages to exact some sort of revenge on Narcisse. All of the other fictional characters seem to have been killed off by this point. This is a sad end to what could have been an all-time great show.